{"id":1055,"date":"2014-03-01T23:10:09","date_gmt":"2014-03-02T04:10:09","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/curculio.org\/?p=1055"},"modified":"2014-03-04T00:26:30","modified_gmt":"2014-03-04T05:26:30","slug":"persius-5-159","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/?p=1055","title":{"rendered":"Persius 5.159: When Two <i>Et<\/i>s Are Two Too Many"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A concise animal allegory illustrates the difficulty of achieving true freedom (5.157-60): <\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><i>nec tu, cum obstiteris semel instantique negaris<br \/>\nparere imperio, &lsquo;rupi iam uincula&rsquo; dicas; <br \/>\nnam et luctata canis nodum abripit, et tamen illi, <br \/>\ncum fugit, a collo trahitur pars longa catenae.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;160<\/i><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<strong>159<\/strong> et tamen <em>\u03b1VXRW<\/em> : at tamen <em>P<\/em> : ast tamen <em>GLN<\/em> : tamen <em>C<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Braund translates the last two lines &ldquo;Even when a bitch breaks the knot after a struggle, a long section of chain still trails from her neck&rdquo;. I don&rsquo;t quite see the &ldquo;when&rdquo; in the Latin, and it seems to me that <em>ut<\/em> for the first <em>et<\/em> in 159 would provide better sense at very small cost. Now the first clause means &ldquo;<em>even supposing<\/em> a bitch breaks the knot after a struggle&rdquo;: a hypothetical is good here. As the <em>OLD<\/em> notes (<em>s.v.<\/em> 35), this concessive use of <em>ut<\/em> is often matched with <em>tamen<\/em> in the main clause, and that is exactly what we have after the comma. It also requires the subjunctive, so we must alter <em>abripit<\/em> to <em>abripiat<\/em> and then delete the second <em>et<\/em> to save the meter. However, that actually removes another small problem: the variants listed in the apparatus, particularly the unmetrical reading of C, point to interpolation. Once <em>abripiat<\/em> had lost its second <em>a<\/em>, <em>et<\/em> and <em>at<\/em> and <em>ast<\/em> were variously inserted to mend the meter, while C or its ancestor left it unmended. <\/p>\n<p>My final text: <\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><i>nam ut luctata canis nodum abripiat, tamen illi, <br \/>\ncum fugit, a collo trahitur pars longa catenae.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;160<\/i><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A concise animal allegory illustrates the difficulty of achieving true freedom (5.157-60): nec tu, cum obstiteris semel instantique negaris parere imperio, &lsquo;rupi iam uincula&rsquo; dicas; nam et luctata canis nodum abripit, et tamen illi, cum fugit, a collo trahitur pars &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/curculio.org\/?p=1055\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,114,110],"tags":[214],"class_list":["post-1055","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-critical-texts","category-persius","category-qltp","tag-persius-5"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1055","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1055"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1055\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1093,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1055\/revisions\/1093"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1055"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1055"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/curculio.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1055"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}